Wednesday, June 6, 2007

Letter

Dear Jane, June 5
After this semester, you have taught me a lot, maybe, I have learned a lot. I used to make some error, which results from ignoring some seems basic but important composition skill. For example, when it is necessary to connect sentence, I sometimes forgot to use conjunction, called run on sentence. Besides, I learn the method of how to write a composition in order such as listing order, time order, space order, and so on., from which I could write composition more coherent than before. Also, I discover the importance of writing draft;through writing draft, I can rearrange my composition in a better way.
In the future, I hope that I could learn the description someone or something in accurate because my vocabulary is not enough to allow me to describe and say what I want to say thoroughly.
Only do this semester came approach to end could I realize that teacher is full of earnestness and goodwill, that is to say, you are a good teacher.
Sincerely, Louis

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